Tutorials and Feedback (Week Three)

I have recently been given some constructive progress feedback subject to the graphics topic that I am currently working on. I was keen to be given the feedback as I hadn't been given much up until this point and I was looking to find any ways that I can improve the work I have so far and to be given ideas of work to do in the future to further my development. I was told that I had completed a good amount of designs for my posters, but to complete some more for the colour with image and text poster. I also came to the realisation while showing my work that I have completed up until this point, that there is a sparse amount of photography for experimentation and development. I was happy to work on this and improve in this area.

I was also told that my typography idea with the word 'waste' written in many different forms to create the silhouette of a take-away coffee cup was a good idea and that I should go forward with it and develop it further. I would like to see if another word would have the same effect. I would like to trial other words like, 'packaging' and 'rubbish' for example. I will complete these on a smaller scale like A5 for example though to ensure they are not too time consuming that they take over from getting my final outcomes finished.

I received advice that I should make sure that I don't have too much text on my colour with text and image poster, this being because my text only poster contains a lot of text, and I should show that I can make a good quality campaign that contains both text and photography. I understood this feedback and was happy to make sure that my work contained a good amount of everything asked in the brief.